Summaries 5

Chapter 5 Revising
When revising, first remember why we are writing –purpose. Revising helps you turn your first draft into a more complete, thoughtful piece of writing, and then, we revising for ideas and organization, complete thinking, clear thesis, overall plan. The second, revising for voice and style, check the level commitment, intensity of your writing, develop an academic style, know when to use the passive voice, when we’re reusing, remember the basics, keep the purpose in mind, check for unity, check for coherence, completeness, writers and reviewers should know their roles and fulfill their responsibilities during revising sessions, provide appropriate feedback, respond according to plan.
Last ,we can pass for classmate, getting advice form a peer edited can be extremely helpful.